Monday, September 15, 2008

Animatic: Part 1:2

So this is the beginning part of the animatic, which is probably not as roughed-in as it should be. I'll crank the last part out with the major key poses so I can block in the timing better.

View "GYMNASTICS" animatic

3 comments:

Lele said...
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Lele said...

I think it looks good. I just wish you could move the other letters as well. It seems pretty short although the motion in the beginning is looking really good. Maybe when the G jumps, it feels that it is heavy by the squashing and timing you used. The gymnastics are very skinny and fast.

sHyaM said...

+1) The animation looks good, there is nice anticipation and follow through.
+2) The fact that G is going outside the frame adds to the surprise element
+3) The squash and stretch on the letters makes it look like the movement of a gymnast.

-1) I don't know whether it is intentional but, why are the other letters static
-2) Again why a different font for the last few letters
-3) Ignore this if this one is incomplete, the piece is a little short ;)

Overall : Good work Garrett